Especially so when I tried to describe a spiritual journey. The Divine Mother is in everything, which is described in the well known hymn Ya Devi Sarva Bhuteshu. I tried to describe the merging with the Mother in the Dance of a dervish.
I Dance the Ya Devi Sarva Bhuteshu, starting slow and getting quicker, till in trance I finally merge, like in Flash of divine light…
Here are the lyrics:
Ya Devi sarve Bhuteshu
Buddhi rupena samstitha
Namastasye Namastasye
Namastasye Namo Namaha
O Goddess in all we see around us
coming to us in divine Intuition (Buddhi=Intuition)
Before your greatness we do bow
We submit ourselves
To you, Namaha
Ya Devi sarve Bhuteshu
Shakti rupena samstitha
Namastasye Namastasye
Namastasye Namo Namaha
O Goddess in all we see around us
Coming to us in the female creative strength (Shakti=Power/Parvati)
Before your greatness we do bow
We submit ourselves
To you, Namaha
Ya Devi sarve Bhuteshu
Bakti rupena samstitha
Namastasye Namastasye
Namastasye Namo Namaha
O Goddess in all we see around us
Coming to us in our great love to God (Bakt=Lover of God)
Before your greatness we do bow
We submit ourselves
To you, Namaha
Ya Devi sarve Bhuteshu
Matri rupena samstitha
Namastasye Namastasye
Namastasye Namo Namaha
O Goddess in all we see around us
Coming to us in our love to our mothers (Matri=Mother)
Before your greatness we do bow
We submit ourselves
To you, Namaha
Ya Devi sarve Bhuteshu
Shanti rupena samstitha
Namastasye Namastasye
Namastasye Namo Namaha
O Goddess in all we see around us
Found in all who search for peace (shanti=peace)
Before your greatness we do bow
We submit ourselves
To you, Namaha
Ya Devi sarve Bhuteshu
Daya rupena samstitha
Namastasye Namastasye
Namastasye Namo Namaha
O Goddess in all we see around us
Found in all who care for the poor (daya=pity)
Before your greatness we do bow
We submit ourselves
To you, Namaha
Ya Devi sarve Bhuteshu
Shraddha rupena samstitha
Namastasye Namastasye
Namastasye Namo Namaha
O Goddess in all we see around us
Found in all who trust in God (shraddha=Devotion)
Before your greatness we do bow
We submit ourselves
To you, Namaha
Ya Devi sarve Bhuteshu
Nidra rupena samstitha
Namastasye Namastasye
Namastasye Namo Namaha
O Goddess in all we see around us
Found in all who widen their consciousness (nidra=sleep)
Before your greatness we do bow
We submit ourselves
To you, Namaha
Ya Devi sarve Bhuteshu
Buddhi rupena samstitha
Namastasye Namastasye
Namastasye Namo Namaha
AnandRahasya 
You sing the original version and also in English, did you write it? I mean English version,… I tried to sing with you 🙂 Beautiful. Dance and sing… Thank you, have a nice weekend, Love, nia
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Yes, I translated it. It is part of the Devi Mahatmayam, the South Indian Version of the Davi Saptashati. Thanks that you liked it. A nice Weekend also for you.
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